Music Magazine Double-Page Article Audience Feedback

This is the audience feedback for the double-page article that I have made. I will show the positives and the negatives, and what they have said about it.

Daniel Smith
Positives - I think that the colour that is used in the background compliments the text as they are both colours of the text are clear to see. I think that the positioning of the images are good because they stand out and placed well around the text.
Negatives - There are no page numbers on the DPS.

Oliver Warden
Positives - The colour scheme is linked from the colour of the text and the colour of the t shirt image link up and is an attractive eye catching feature
The text does not overlap the images and makes it clear to navigate the page and to read the text
Negatives - The orange writing doesn't fully contrast the background colour and strains your eyes to read it.

Alex Smith
Positives - I like the way that you have taken the colour blue from his top and used in throughout the magazine, I think that this works effectively because it looks more professional and more presentable. I also like the way that you have a quote, I think that this is an aspect that is used a lot throughout magazine and like the way that you have added it into this. I also like the way that you have used the photos so it grabs the readers attention more
Negatives - I don't like the way that your question before the quote is off line from the rest of the columns I don't think that this looks as professional as it could be.

Louisa Osborne
Positives - I really like how the pictures have been edited to fit around the text. The editing itself of the photos is really precise and professional. The article is very clear and 'easy on the eye' its not too busy which could annoy some audiences. I like the quote that has been placed in the article as it will attract someone to read on.
Negatives - Even though I liked how clear the article is, it might be a little too spacious for this type of magazine. I'm not too sure on the colour scheme either but this may be biased because i am a girl. The columns aren't in line with each other which might confuse readers. Dean could make the width of the first paragraph smaller to proportion everything out a bit better.